What If

Details: Written by: Nbonner; Category: Poetry; Created: August 6, 2017, 2:15 pm; Hits: 1144

What if you gave up?

How could you bring yourself to self-destruct?

After all your promising efforts

To become the best at whatever

Igniting the idea of becoming lost

From being lost to picking yourself up again no matter the cost

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Great poem! Powerful and moving! Keep writing

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