If at first you fail.

Details: Written by: Kid88; Category: Poetry; Created: May 8, 2017, 9:10 am; Hits: 900

I tried my best, I tried and failed

I tried my best, To no prevail

I tried hard, And tried again

Always lost, trying to win

I tried harder, I tried once more

I didn't give up, My tries adored

I tried alas, alas I tried

The evidence, my broken smile

I tried beyond ability

I tried and tried, And failed to see

I tried fearsome, I tried with shame

I tried maliciously, With selfish aim

I tried for me, For no one else

I tried with greed, Gave back no help

I tried unhappy, Discontent

I succeeded, malevolence

I tried wonders, Miracles

I laughed at the, impossible

I began to try, oh positive
My success was a reflection of,

My persistence

I kept it up,
I kept on trying,

Like I should.

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Many are quick to be dismissive of "suicide poetry...

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i like the message but unfortunately dont see it e...

wickedwahine_69 posted a comment in Excruciation

Makes me want to scream!

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I think you need to give very serious consideratio...

WhisperSage posted a comment in OF THE SELF

Alberto,Thank you! Lisa