we dip our feet in the water

Details: Written by: Daniel S; Category: Poetry; Created: July 9, 2012, 10:12 pm; Hits: 1621

we dip our feet in the water,

shrieking in fear at the monsters lurking

below the surface, faking laughter

at our own childishness, stirring up

God knows what monstrosities

that live in the murky, fetid depths of the sea

and our imaginations.

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I enjoyed this very much!