Ha - i - ku

Details: Written by: Raven; Category: Poetry; Created: March 26, 2012, 9:25 am; Hits: 1976

the sense of it all

essential simplicity

and incompleteness

YvonneA posted a comment in Me te aroha nui (Retort)

I really felt this. I see it as some very old love...

grunfruaorshell posted a comment in Because I swear this isn't a love poem

Liked the way you express the pulling and tearing ...

tzett1 posted a comment in Chest of Whores

Thank you both. I very much appreciate it!

grunfruaorshell posted a comment in You Were at the Bus Stop.

As always you use a small amount of words to say s...

Raven posted a comment in Moonlight Sonata

Thank you, and I am really happy it made you feel ...