Third Planet

Details: Written by: ugwerks; Category: Poetry; Created: May 11, 2010, 11:54 am; Hits: 1987

There were things you thought you’d feel
Things left undone
But it had always seemed so real
You thought you were the one
Third planet from the sun

Zany Lynn posted a comment in Hidden Gem

Well said. Thank you.

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I love how the "You are transparent"-part is repea...

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Thank you. I did enter this piece, perhaps I will...

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I L.O.V.E. this. It may be the same for many of us...

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The emotions of this poem are very real and powerf...