Third Planet

Details: Written by: ugwerks; Category: Poetry; Created: May 11, 2010, 11:54 am; Hits: 1840

There were things you thought you’d feel
Things left undone
But it had always seemed so real
You thought you were the one
Third planet from the sun

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Thanks

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Excellent rhythm. Just one suggestion, on the sec...