Third Planet

Details: Written by: ugwerks; Category: Poetry; Created: May 11, 2010, 11:54 am; Hits: 1877

There were things you thought you’d feel
Things left undone
But it had always seemed so real
You thought you were the one
Third planet from the sun

Joshua Hennen posted a comment in Things I should have said...

Very nice imagery ... "vividagery"

Brandon_Hennen posted a comment in Refuge

Ah, a poem for the poet. explaining the inner work...

wickedwahine_69 posted a comment in Moonlight

Very well done! Makes me want the sun to go down.....

carlenejgraham posted a comment in A Rhyme of Passion

diggin it..dark but not creepy....VW...

IriniTacit posted a comment in In the Dark Night of the Soul

Wow! It is VERY interesting you should make this ...