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Through the liquid glass; Porifera

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she gazes n2 the pool surrounded by white ceramic... familiar looks back. also a sponge. It is heaving...

::emergence::

- a sea cucumber???



02-09-A.D. 2007 7

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Maybe I should note that the pool, the sponge, and the sea cucumber are euphemistic metaphors... Hope you guys have fun deciphering it.

-Soulja4Alethia

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I'm not sure if I can decifer it, but I like it nevertheless. More please.

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I remember Leopold Bloom comparing pubic hair around ‘it’ to a flow of water or swirls of water
Something like that

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Well, water is a universal metaphor for fertility, "heaving" and "emergence" seem like symbols of pubscent self awareness, and a sea cucumber would seem to fit nicely into a fertility construct.

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Haha, okay you guys are making this sound a lot nicer than it really is! Incorrect so far, but I like the guesses. -Soulja4Alethia

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Given Soulja's penchant for skatology, I'd venture to guess a floating piece of excrement!

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And now I have to look up the word scatology...

-Soulja4Alethia

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But at least you spelled it right, hehe... doh!

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