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Choked for you

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There is nothing like a choked up pipe
When you cannot get a thing through
All clogged
Everything sewered
Seems time grew

Pain is like that
Formed and crystallized
When day dawns and cry pines
In the spine of spines

Often one overlooks
The details in the nooks
Upsetting
plain things see
and nothing sane has happened to me

I know how to put things through
Just to say ivus
But just in case
JUST
if I may;
Stay the way you are
Bright as day

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I think the 2nd paragraph accentuate how i feel,the whole poem is quite riveting.

jacob
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Apologies..I accidentally hit the REPORT button. Please do not be alarmed should u be contacted. I SM SO SORRY.. having some problems with my fingers of late...
Back to ur comment, thanks!

In appreciation for the comment, Jacob

Lynn

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