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Vapors

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Awake to face the noon day dawn
like a loving doe or that in a fawn
we all want to belong 
I exist as a vapor then I am no more... 
And then clouds form 
when the invisible vapours
in the air, 
condenses into visible droplets... 
And thus the cycle continues...
sprinkled with a bit of care
the love to behold a new day's sun
 

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  1. Sopheeaw

I like the concept/subject matter. The on again, off again rhyme "scheme" is a bit distracting.

 
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