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Clouds on My Tongue

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There are clouds on my tongue
The right words can't be sung
Enveloped in fog,
they are caught in a bog
Yet, if I could converse,
they would not be terse
Flooding through all the fears
lived out through all your years,
their rains would fully stop
the pain your tears drop

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Nicely done. Heart felt on the one. Many times I've had clouds on my tongue.

Mil57man
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Thank you.

Rosaline George
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I`m in love with the sound message it portrays.

mellowood
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Hi, Melusi! Thank you for your kind message. :-)

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