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Right or wrong rejection kills part of your soul

Each time it’s used against you your heart turns to stone

Just like that you put up this wall and you want revenge tenfold

Exclude those people from your life, don’t let your blood run cold

Christ is the punisher, be patient, do not let yourself be pulled

Two wrongs don’t make a right, when you retaliate your emotions lose control

Every time your emotions lose control you unintentionally hurt other people

Do not let other people mold you into someone you no longer know



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I like this poem. The lines indicate a hopefulness but the acrostic is savage. The dissonance is effective.

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