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If life were a dream
I'd Go back to a time 
A time when I was young
So careless and free
When all that seemed to matter
Only mattered to me
 
Young and dumb
I had dreams of being loved
Praying that God would send me 
Send me someone from above 
Joy, happiness, grief, despair
I had no clue one person could take me there
 
Now the pressure's real and
It's getting really tough
The boys still Remember 
But I question if it's enough
I don't want them to suffer
They've suffered enough
 
From everything I gather
Lord, you think I'm pretty tough
But if You really know me Lord
Then you know I gotta be upfront 
The pain, the loneliness, the tears
Why must I suffer for all of these years
 
Your mercy, Your grace, is my safe place
My faith has given me a resting place
To lay my fears, worries, and wants
I trust You have given this plenty of thought
To bless my boys with such a special dad
Surely you wouldn't have taken him 
If you didn't have a much bigger plan
 
 

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This is such a heartfelt plea... I especially appreciated the ending which was unexpected. Welcome to Hennen's Megan!

Joshua Hennen
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Thank you, July 4th was the three year anniversary of my husbands passing, writing has always been my outlet. I appreciate you taking the time to read.

Meg82
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Dear Meg

Hang on in there.
Our Lord hears you.
Thank you for sharing your pain in this wonderful poem from the heart.

Zany Lynn
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Thank you for your kind words.

Meg82
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Excellently written...I love it immensely.

mellowood
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Thank you!?

Meg82
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