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Take and not give
You shall exist
Never living
Right

Into baleful claims
We impart from within
Finding, parting
Wrong

How does it become
like this?
Events churn
The craving
Maybe

Truly indeed
Some say
That life is what breeds
within
Insightful

Why do Rivulets roam
on a warm summer's day
Only to land
outside
Delightful

I am treading
like the soulful dame
on cracks
between
Calmly

It is bright
Life renewed
Much awaits this morning
after
Affirmed
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This poem is very evocative... proving that sometimes fewer words equals more that is said.

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Very much so.
Will keep this precious feedback in mind, Joshua.
Appreciate this.

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