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The Girl I once was and Now is...

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I look back, back at her with eyes filled with admiration I look back, back at her with eyes filled with inspiration I look back, back at her with eyes filled with contentment Although young as she was, fragile as she was, full of fear as she was she had wishes big enough to drive an imagination wild she had dreams big enough to make her tremble in her boots She believed in her, against all odds, against all parameters and limitations She held on to the faith nad hope that She is and She will be all that her mind can see and her heart can feel Guess what She made it, still running through this race to be more .... The girl I once was and am now ... Roughneck kinda, Sultry kinda Sweet .kinda never giving up...RockStar!!!

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Wow!

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Hi I Melusi,in line number seven there is a spelling mistake.Putting that aside the poem has a great message.

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Beautiful start repetitives (I look back, back) powerfully propelling message to all who don't want to lose hope.

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Hi Sharon,
Positive vibrations.
The repetition of certain phrases brought in musicality.
All the best, rock star.

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