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In the love of an inexplicable girl

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Forgot day, month, six
The rainy season was rainy day
Windy night winds,
Sometimes the thunderstorm sometimes
Again and again in my chest
The girl had hidden her head.
 
I see again in the light of the lightning
A spectacular face in the eye,
Did not understand then at Mrinmay
Does he mean love or love?
 
But it was foolish, under passion
He opened all the doors,
It meant to walk on its way
I need more, what do you think?
 
I take care of myself again and again
Emotional fascination, I mean,
All my attempts to fail are unwise
Captured me with his eyesight.
 
I did not get time to think about anything
His picture stuck in the heart of the heart,
Suddenly, on the dark night of the world of sleeping
Loving the mind is in love with an inexplicable girl.

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Hi i Melusi,the first paragraph is a bit cnfusing to the reader but the rest of the poem is coherent,I don`t think its a great poem in anyway the reason being there was no use imagery and it wasn`t poetic in the truest sense of the word.

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