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These flowers here; they look like you

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These flowers here, do you like them?
The petals, the leaves and the stem?
I picked them down by Sunset Street
We always passed there with slow feet
I wish I knew more about your favourite things dear
Now, I can only hope you like these flowers here

They look like you, joyful and bright
This bunch of tulips - green, pink, white
They possess a delicate charm
Like you, and you both be so calm.
I placed them on your tomb child, hope you like them too 

These innocent flowers; Oh how they look like you

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Very good poem indeed! It took a different turn at the end which was unexpected but appreciated. Thank you!

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  2. #3747
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Thank you very much!! Your feedback is greatly appreciated

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Thanks for sharing this piece with me Diddy. I really needed to start my day reading something as beautiful as your piece. Keep up the good writing!

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Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece Diddy! Keep up the good writing.

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Great poem! Really moving !

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  2. #3756
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Thank you for the feedback Vatsala!

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