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Time

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Time is gripe

Time fulfill me

 

Time delight

In time I keep

In time I weep

 

 

Why buy time?

If time is so hard 

too steep, too deep

 

Beep...beep...beep

Indeed Time is sublime

Never too late

to save time

 

I pray not

Time takes time

For one needs time

before Time, takes time

Don't scream 

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What a compelling example of repetition with meaning. Some of the juxtapositions were fairly sublime and thought provoking. I can't wait to see more of your work. Thank you Lynn and welcome to Hennen's Observer!

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I like the under current in this poem and the play on the word time. Good Job.

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Thank you, Vangoman!

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