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I often wonder, do thoughts escape at event horizon?

Or, do the lights just switch off, provided you cease to be?

Controversially, consciousness has proven it's limitation rests not with the skull;

I am very concerned, considering my trust lies not with a Higher Power,

 

And to say we return to Heaven, or Nibiru doesnt satisfy logic.

Upon the billions of galaxies in the visible Universe I lay trust more life exists

Which provides the question, What makes us so damn special?

What god lives on a doomed planet absorbing our souls?

Or are we just chemical reactions in a brains circumference,

even though we all feel to be more than neurological processes.

Coming of age on a planet destined to collide, or face atomic genocide,

to realizing against the church pew raising that literally nothing is out there to save us.

It all rolls off the tongue just a tad bit depressing.

 

 

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My thoughts exactly!!! Dooms day lays ahead, but where will our souls process their death? Love it! Especially the line "Coming of age on a planet destined to collide, or face atomic genocide," Thank-you!

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"Kismet" I spent my drive home today pondering these exact same thoughts. CD Galaxies take 10 million light years just to fly across them, trillions of light years to reach another galaxies. From 2000 feet above the earth we cease to exist. As a...

"Kismet" I spent my drive home today pondering these exact same thoughts. CD Galaxies take 10 million light years just to fly across them, trillions of light years to reach another galaxies. From 2000 feet above the earth we cease to exist. As a young man it was possible to believe in a magic spirit to create us. But now I find more truth is in the void of darkness easier to swallow. WE ARE ALL ALONE, yet because of the people I've met in my lifetime, that's okay.

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Very well put. I've been in what you could label an "existential crisis" the past month or so. I'm getting better and a little less depressing to be around.

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