"Emerging Writers, Serious Writers"

since 2009

Poetry, Prose & More. Join Us!

What Beautiful Demise

User Rating: 5 / 5

Star ActiveStar ActiveStar ActiveStar ActiveStar Active
 

We are but crystaline wine glasses

Under a mad man's hammer.

Such beautifully splintered fragments-

Falling into place at our

most inconvinient moment.

Comments (2)

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Excellent poem! I love the crystaline/wine combination. I wonder what your thoughts are about leaving out the first three words. "We are but" seems 19th century and maybe too direct.

Joshua Hennen
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Yea Im thinking so too. Thanks for the feedback!

Uniquely...Disfunctional
There are no comments posted here yet

Leave your comments

  1. Posting comment as a guest.
Attachments (0 / 3)
Share Your Location