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Magic Emptiness

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Not fully aware,

Our minds elsewhere.

An interesting kiss,

Somewhat forbidden

Not thinking clearly

Stop. Stop. Stop.

“Come on,” he says.

Close my eyes.

Wait for beauty

Wait for love

Wait for magic

That never comes.

And now I’m numb.

Erase it from my memory.

An empty space

An empty face

Just magic emptiness.

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Welcome back Amanda! This reworking of "Magic Emptiness" is really well done. I can't wait to see more!

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