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Bling!

A total freak

Some say You Reek

Of bling

You say… it’s the thing

From head to toe

You are glad

A dancing swagger fad

You go, go ,go!

All the while

A Chestire cats smile

Displaying your grid

Silver and chrome

Dazzling gnome

Silver toes to rival your foes

A total production

A real Red Carpet piece

Intoxicating fizz

With more,more, more!

Bling,bling, bling!

 

10/1/2006 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Great poem... I especially like the rhymes and the near total lack of prepositions to get in the way. "A dancing swagger fad." That's a very evocative line, I think.

Joshua Hennen
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I must tell you that this piece caught my daughters eye I was reading it and from across the room, " Go, go, go!" She says! So we read it together. It really is a very simple poem but when read, I can picture the bling for sure! Thank-you and...

I must tell you that this piece caught my daughters eye I was reading it and from across the room, " Go, go, go!" She says! So we read it together. It really is a very simple poem but when read, I can picture the bling for sure! Thank-you and welcome to Hennens

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