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A Deadly Love

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Maria, Maria full of grace. He wipes the smile off her face. With his hand front and hand back, he gives her lovely face a smack. Tears fall free and bruises rise, yet she faithfully stands by his side. Maria, Maria full of grace. A boot now takes the hands place. Broken ribs add to the tears. She cowers and stays even with her fears. Maria, Maria ...

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wickedwahine_69
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Well done! You've got bite... read this and kept thinking Maria, Maria...

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goddessofloco
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thanks you!

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Joshua Hennen
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I liked it... short and to the point, which in this case was very effective.

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Thank you Joshua, your feedback means allot!

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