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So much anger so much hate.
I hear her voice and I debate.
What does she want. To be my friend or take her life and rub it in.
Moved on and moved away was it easy for you?
Do you stop to think of the things that you do
So quick to blame others for this and that. Never do you mention your role in the spat
The affect that you have on the hearts that you touch
When your selfish anger is all that you clutch.
You wonder why others don't give a fuck
Your venomous words are like a punch in the gut
Life moves on and I will too, but I hope these words ring out true.
Because these words are just for you.

 

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Great poem, John, and welcome to Hennen's Observer! I think you were definitely going in some interesting directions in this poem. I wonder, have you ever tried to not rhyme? I get the feeling that maybe you were constrained by the need to make...

Great poem, John, and welcome to Hennen's Observer! I think you were definitely going in some interesting directions in this poem. I wonder, have you ever tried to not rhyme? I get the feeling that maybe you were constrained by the need to make the words fit. But I think you did it well, in any event.

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