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There! Look…look, there, you see
This time mutt’s really out to get that flea
Husband and wife are getting back in touch
Dull businessmen enjoy dull business lunch
Neighbor begrudges neighbor’s Christmas lights
Dumped lassie reaches for Turkish Delights
And still above there and out of sight
Can’t you hear it? Galaxies collide
Can’t you heart a child sigh and turn-
Over in bed as slowly creeps in the morn
While sky’s yet dark into its bark I carved
Some triviality that has to do with love

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Your words could never be mistaken for another, a chalet located next door to Salvador Dali. "While skies yet dark into its bark I carved....How can you not love this line? This line shall weather!

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Thanky. I actually had a better idea for this line something along the lines of - 'with one hand he held her, with the other a knife, grinning into black bark of the night sky' etc. but then i'm too lazy, so i just shoved it in here and out of my...

Thanky. I actually had a better idea for this line something along the lines of - 'with one hand he held her, with the other a knife, grinning into black bark of the night sky' etc. but then i'm too lazy, so i just shoved it in here and out of my head.<br />Thanks for noticing though.

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