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Ode to Nick Drake

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there is a whole world out there that i just dont wanna join

they care only for the tall buildings and their metal coins

when they say they care for all of their fellow people

they can love but, tear out the soul from all our loins

 

so where should i stay now, where is my temporary home.

where should i stay because i have nowhere to roam

 

my mind is full of things and ideas of what to do

i want to tell all of these things to the people and you

but my mind is caged like its an ill, desperate beast

i wish to break the lock so i see another point of view

 

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Where should I stay? Because I have nowhere to roam. Awesomeness.

wickedwahine_69
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Being a lone wolf is a difficult existence. "they can love but, tear out the soul from all our loins" is a great line that I think could be really developed. But I like it as it stands.

Joshua Hennen
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