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the man without a shadow

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The man without a shadow

he tries to forget

he may have his victory

but the war rages on

hes losing all knowledge

through the rain a tear drops

shoeless he walks for miles

like a raging storm he never stops

with every whimper, wish and whisper

he still walks alone, with out a shadow.

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Vangoman
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There's a soft velvet feeling with rich deep undertones to this work, and I Luv, Luv, Luv it. Thank You for sharing this with all of us. It's beautiful.

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I agree with VangoMan, I was left with images sadness, but in a sort of deep, good way Awesome work!

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