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One of the worst feelings you can feel

Is feeling alone, even when in a crowded room

You feel like your on your own

Your heart feels heavy, your mood is dark

Feels like there is no escape from

The pain  in your heart

You feel like there is no one to turn to

No one you can talk to

Its like no one gets you

Isolated and alone

Feelings  built up

Too much to handle on your own

Who can you talk to

Can you find someone to turn to

Is there any one that understands you

Some one who actually cares

There is someone you can turn to

Will always be there for you

When loneliness get too much to bare

You have pain in your heart

And it feels like it will never clear

You feel like your at your lowest


Pray to JAH/GOD for strength, to help get you through

The pain and despair you are

Going through


 By B Gibson

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The sense of desperation of this piece was palpable. It turned somewhat spiritual at the end which was a different turn than we often see with poetry of this sort.

Joshua Hennen
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