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White Fading into Gray

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Against the distant sky

Icy rigid fingers trace

Trail of white steam

Fading into the vast gray space

The quiet spirit sketched

Beholden to a hidden grace

The unfound is fetched

And put in its place 

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Excellent imagery and the words/phonemes are carefully constructed to to roll forth from the mouth, esp. lines such as "Trail of white steam."

Joshua Hennen
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The unfound is fetched... love it

wickedwahine_69
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Imagery of icy fingers traced a place in me with this poem. Dankeshon NYCG

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