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Black Sheep

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One of these things just doesn’t belong
One of these things is not like the others.

And so the black sheep makes his way across the pasture,
Roaming alone, determined in the search of no other.

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"...determined in the search of no other." I like that concept. It would be interesting to see if you could flesh that out more.

Joshua Hennen
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Something about this short poem, it captures humanity as a whole, solitude, sadness, but somehow content. I really like this one. This is one of those less said the better.

Vangoman
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This was one that slipped through the cracks some time ago... I read it and felt it had some depth worth sharing The concept could be fleshed out more but I'm not sure black sheep give a hoot to explain themselves anyhow...

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