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Mind Clouds

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Into the minds they go

Literary poets with naked cloths

Wordy little hoe’s with books and bows

Pulitzers carried in pedagogical sack

 

A slice above Webster’s new world

Be they lonely men or genius grown girls

Mining the silt within our cloud

Milking words that scream out loud

 

And quite one twos

Colorfully read greens and blues

Accolade, acerbity, witty, and attune

Those whom remain in this winters June

 

It’s for the thin streaks of sun they wear

In hair strings of words that say I dare

Uncovering the coverings of done

Lucubration with a background in song

 

That feeling of living alive

The spring of the highest dive

Under bottoms of unfiltered waters

Volumes in poetic mutters

 

The suns must rise in the east

Slewing the beast to the west

Stumbling in thick honey lust

Tumbling for a word is a must

 

Poetry is mans only tree

Behold her red golden leaves

The trunk of man has worn free

The forest is growing new trees

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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bravo! twisting language to meet your creative ebb and flow. i particularly like the last verse...the only thing i would critique is the second line of the second verse. i'm not sure what you're describing in that line, it seems forced. other...

bravo! twisting language to meet your creative ebb and flow. i particularly like the last verse...the only thing i would critique is the second line of the second verse. i'm not sure what you're describing in that line, it seems forced. other than that, i really like this poem.

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I love every word of it One of your best!

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I want to thank you both for your comments, they really do mean the world to me, and Brandon the second line and verse was a feeble attempt to say it does not matter if we are a man of heart or a woman of mind (Different ends of the spectrum) the...

I want to thank you both for your comments, they really do mean the world to me, and Brandon the second line and verse was a feeble attempt to say it does not matter if we are a man of heart or a woman of mind (Different ends of the spectrum) the poetry never the less collapes us- regardless.

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Great profile pic!

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i really enjoyed the choice of words and openness of definition thank you very inspirational to me

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