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Splashing Blue

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Eyes the color of splashing waves

Life tides subside saving my days

In a wink three ships rise from depth of seas

The father the son and a ghost of me

She is the pure salt in summer breeze

Waves only break because she’ll be pleased

Somewhere in those crashing blues

I’ve finally found the sun

A place to store my heart

Until this life is done

 

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A delight to ponder over and float upon the waves of imagination. Beautifully written.

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Absolutely, fantasmaly, extraordinarily divine! "Pure salt in the summer breeze," Makes me want to taste her! Love it! Top ten for sure if not number one! Thank-you

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