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fisher king brought to his knees by evil sin

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i was born with a romantic heart and a poets mind, 

its a cruel joke unless you are by my side

i think and write about you and what we do

i laugh about our inside jokes. it comes naturally to me

my attachemnts are strong and my jealousy is a bitch

i envy the secret and our mutuall agreement.

ignore me in public, leave me hanging,

so i want to be pranging or erasing my energy through

frustrated push ups. when i focus my mind on you i wouldnt stop pushing

but then i know you come back to mine

and the realisation of your body next to me, oh my. the excitement

the warmth, the strangle, the dry bump and grind

all the while your eyes blowing my mind

my jealousy is a bitch then you look at me that way and my heart races

i want you, fully, irreversably, irretrievably, irrevecobaly, all to myself

my jealousy is born from the fact i know that no matter how much i want you

i never think i can and i never think i will, and that is painful

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The vividness of your poem leaves no doubt that it's borne of experience! The last line could have been stronger though. It would have been nice for the knife to "twist a little bit" at the culmination. It's anticlimactic as it stands, but you...

The vividness of your poem leaves no doubt that it's borne of experience! The last line could have been stronger though. It would have been nice for the knife to "twist a little bit" at the culmination. It's anticlimactic as it stands, but you could have been purposely going for that. Thanks for this poem.

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This could be slammed... very good...

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