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Haiku No. 1

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Chinese lantern

Easter lily

Flower Cloud fire

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This makes me think "melting pot"

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Very perceptive -it is a symbolism and hopefully a lovely pictures of two oppisites melted into one. The cloud look of the lily and the fire of the latern. Hopefully it made a visual picture of the two as one. a cloud on fire. Thank you for your...

Very perceptive -it is a symbolism and hopefully a lovely pictures of two oppisites melted into one. The cloud look of the lily and the fire of the latern. Hopefully it made a visual picture of the two as one. a cloud on fire. Thank you for your input and perspective wicked one. In haiku I try to always use the first two lines as the set-up for the third "Tradion is very important to the Japanese!

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I like how you set it up When I first read it I thought of my own family- Asian, White, Indian, Black with everything else in between ;)I thought that this was a nice visual... picturing everyone together in my head at a party with floating...

I like how you set it up When I first read it I thought of my own family- Asian, White, Indian, Black with everything else in between ;)I thought that this was a nice visual... picturing everyone together in my head at a party with floating lanterns and soft smelling lilies watching the blazing sunset extinguish... When I read it I picture orange, then like soft pink/white then dark blue and purple. Lol that's what I saw anyways fyi Thanks

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