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Kindred Feelings

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The bad scent
   of a wrong move
breaks the dike
   of ancient homicide.
Boiling rage releases
   torrential blows.
A chimpanzee screams
   fleeing as loungers
   give chase
   frenzied.

Surging Sapiens rise
laughing.
Watching through a glass wall
cheering.

 

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I like this

wickedwahine_69
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Thank you. This happened at a chimpanzee exhibit at a local zoo. The Sapiens reacted to the fight precisely the way the chimps did. Who says we're not distant cousins?

Joshua Hennen
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Hmmmm makes me wonder....I saw this poem running through my head in simple black and white illustrations. Good job as always Josh.

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