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Venetian Rain

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Venetian Rain

 

"Domenica 8 Maggio 2011"

 

I

Raging green and blue eyes

The sea colliding with the sky

 

I.i

I would get lost again

Wandering

In Venetian rain

 

II

...

 

III

Haunted house on the calle

Singing its dead song

To the moon

Beneath the stars

 

Howling

 

IV

Old midnight ghost

Is never sleeping

He wanders, searching

For his eternal love

 

V

But she is lost

Wandering

Through Venetian streets

In Venetian rain

 

VI

Until suddenly

She sees him

Standing in the rain

Waiting for her

 

VII

He walks silent

Toward her

Places a hand

Upon her marble chest

 

VIII

Heartbeat steady

Rain never ending

Kiss eternal

 

"Ti amo"

She whispers

Where have you been...

 

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How beautiful does a poem become? When it becomes you! "tears"

Vangoman
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This is very beautiful - I love the lines "Wandering through Venetian streets in Venetian rain."

Anyone_s Ghost
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A happy end! A graceful song.

Knjaz Chernozmejsky
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