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Flocks of Suns

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Flocks of suns floating with southern swans

On rivers flowing in dissolving directions

Slow and warm fast and cold swirling and sifting

Some rivers flow under skies never knowing why

Until the falls call for us to empty

Joining the floating swans and suns drifting

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I liked how you wrapped this poem around. I like your words, the way you use them. Each word that passes the other is a compliment to it. Very well done. Leslee

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Thank You leslee, I really liked this one also- the words just came to me without effort. p.s. I think it's a shame about those bullies- As soon as the tables turn they understand....to late. Let her know I'm thinking of her and wishing her the...

Thank You leslee, I really liked this one also- the words just came to me without effort. p.s. I think it's a shame about those bullies- As soon as the tables turn they understand....to late. Let her know I'm thinking of her and wishing her the best. (A great big gigantic boyfriend)

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