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I Put my Love in a Jar...

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I put my love in a jar

with bits of honeycomb

I sealed it up

with melted candle wax

and left it on the windowsill.

 

I watched the light

dance through the amber

and with each flickering dream

I breathed out all my wants.

 

I hope to open it one day

with you.

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I can see it, a amber glow romantically dancing with the window and walls, and your soft warm breath blowing out the flame, waiting for that special one. Vivid and beautiful.

Vangoman
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Thank you my friend.

grunfruaorshell
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I want to say "don't put in the window! it might get flat! it get's cold there! it might get broken! don't leave it unattended!" Although sometimes things are safer put away... idk... idk why your pieces always make me want to fight on the side...

I want to say "don't put in the window! it might get flat! it get's cold there! it might get broken! don't leave it unattended!" Although sometimes things are safer put away... idk... idk why your pieces always make me want to fight on the side of love... maybe I see myself in your work... anywho thanks for gettin' my blood going

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I am glad that it touched you...and yes, I think we should fight for Love.

grunfruaorshell
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