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Talk to me baby, tell me a story...

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"Tourists from all over the world go there..."

Bass reverberates from his chest.

"Cameras everywhere..."

But I'm not interested in birds or eagles.

Only the way he tells me of their beauty.

"It's outside of Seattle..."

His voice takes me everywhere

With slow deliberate direction

But he's always home to me.

"One of the most beautiful things I've ever seen..."

And I ride the waves of his words,

Into an ocean of deep, peaceful sleep.

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Excellent work! I appreciate the way that you cut into your thought process rather abruptly ... it gives immediacy to your primary and only purpose: to make us feel the same serenity that the subject of the poem feels while listening to her...

Excellent work! I appreciate the way that you cut into your thought process rather abruptly ... it gives immediacy to your primary and only purpose: to make us feel the same serenity that the subject of the poem feels while listening to her lover's words.

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Joshua Hennen
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From the gut to the heart, thank you.

Vangoman
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Thanks guys Serene is definitely the way my heart felt

wickedwahine_69
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Great piece.

Kathleen15
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Well done wicked, but may I be so bold as to ask who you're lauding. forgive my ignorance.

Alberto
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My husband When we first met it was one of the things that made me fall in love with him... this calm that reaches to my core...

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