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For that ass! (edited)

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Yeah I’ve got some venom for that ass

I can taste it in my mouth as I hold my tongue

I can feel it bubbling under my skin

Becoming more potent with each passing moment

Swelling my insides with hate,

Watch your eyes bitch,

I’m spewing this shit today,

And you WILL learn,

That my words,

Are laced with poison,

And I intend to rip your fucking heart out,

Break you in half,

And watch you fucking rot.

;)

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this is much better. very angry. however because you used the word 'although' i feel the story still needs an ending.

Soi-Disant, The Blue Roof

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Okay I'm sensing anger here. :-) Deliciously vicious!

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Just a little It was actually pretty difficult to get back to that rage...

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