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Pimp Love

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Fog that once rose

Now falls in place

As wet pain drops

Befall cheek n face

Surely a love stain

Cannot erase,

The remains

Of a lovers disgrace

.           .           .

A woman’s heart

Soft tissue scar,

Easily accessed

Past her guard,

Words on tongue

Jump to their death,

Before elegance

Caught her breath

.           .           .

Fallen heart defense

Emotion swallows dissent

For sale human scent

Swollen dark for rent

Pinpoint heart poke

Cold hard flesh joke

Crack n whore coke

Found choked

From a Pimp

Love hoax

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Very dark and gritty take on an equally dark and gritty subject. Your language was exquisite--"Swollen dark for rent" for instance. Furthermore, your rhymes were as natural as can be, which is difficult in this time of poetic stagnation. I am...

Very dark and gritty take on an equally dark and gritty subject. Your language was exquisite--"Swollen dark for rent" for instance. Furthermore, your rhymes were as natural as can be, which is difficult in this time of poetic stagnation. I am very impressed.

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i enjoyed reading this. good poem

Soi-Disant, The Blue Roof

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Honestly, you're so very kind and I thank you for that alone. I do so love when two words become one, it can be so much fun.

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I like this, dark for some, reality for others.

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Thank you all it's much appreciated. I have not heard of Iceberg Slim but I will check him out, I already love his name.

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