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In The Depths of Dreaming

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You were there and I was born in the depths of dreaming I had my birth

But I could only watch as you ended entering obscurity

I was there and you ended in the depths of dreaming you ended

And I was born

 

 

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Wow. I love short poems, and this is beautiful and haunting. Something lost at birth, lost before it had even begun. Yeah, I definitely know that feeling.

The_Unwanted
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I'm in love with this poem.

Vagabond
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Thanks guys, as a matter of life and death. One's death may mean the rebirth of another's life "R"

Raven
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