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Sticky Feet

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Cruddy downward eyes

I arise with sticky feet

Brainwaves bind

Weak week this week

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What for why?

I served my time

Building these cities

Fist fighting life

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Master craftsman

Traitor to time

Left alone mine

Easing in their life

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I should sheet the day

Sleep away my bones

Proud steel rough hands

Tucked in at home

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“Under his breath”

Iron men and copper wires

Soon we’ll all be expired!

 (Not even a thanks)

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Computer heads…hmmp.

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wickedwahine_69
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It's true the world is changing but without rough handed men we are nothing. Thanks

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quidquid
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But what about softhandedmen bound for roughhandedmen’s work!!!

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Vangoman
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Soft or hard which would you choose. Don't let me down Quid, Quid. By the way wahine, your last piece was so full of reality, I still cant get over the depth of it. Deeper than the sea they sailed away on. You rock girl friend.

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I have always been akin to strong, rough, calloused hands. Hands that tell a story... hands that are able to catch me if I fall. And thank you again I'm glad that you enjoyed it, I wasn't sure if I was going to be able to capture the emotions...

I have always been akin to strong, rough, calloused hands. Hands that tell a story... hands that are able to catch me if I fall. And thank you again I'm glad that you enjoyed it, I wasn't sure if I was going to be able to capture the emotions that at times are so tangible. Mission accomplished

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quidquid
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Elegant

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Vangoman
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Thanks dear sir and Lady. The more time I spend on this site the better for me, because of writers of your caliber who grace these pages. Great seems to be a past time here at this window. Thank You

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