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Snow Day

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life lacquered
in beautiful blue
frozen rain freezing
faces of you in
thought crystals.

The piny branches bend
touching the top of my memory again.

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I can picture you out there, walking in it. Snow. Nice, subtle, memorable.

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Thank you.

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Two memorable closing lines here,Joshua!

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