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Falling - Video

New bright dawns are appearing below
I can hear footsteps in the snow
Neurons vibrate at the speed of light
I can see with unlimited sight

Rainbows are appearing from deep dark holes
To illuminate life from pole to pole
Bullets insane tensified the night
To leave no lasting fright

Falling down the gravity lift
I’ve opened the lid to my infinite gift
Falling back from the edge of beyond
My conscience is clear now my fog lights are on
Falling down the sanity tube
I’ve realigned the walls of my Rubik’s Cube
Falling back into my blood and bones
Big Brother has lost one of its clones

Now the dream I live for is level and true
My scars are on the inside battered and blue
Mother nature dictates, I choose to obey
She strengthens my root then blows me away
Now for all the confused lonely helpless souls
Who are actually helping the world to go astray
Here are some suggestions
So that you can light your way

Alert yourself to what’s in your head
Dreams can exist outside your bed
Observe your thoughts like the clouds in the sky
When you feel free ask yourself why
Submerge your heart in therapeutic fires
The ashes will contain your secret desires
Pain is a signal to get back on track
You control the wheel and you fill the backpack
Harbour wisdom into your cylindrical hull
Power surges forward past invincible
Laugh out loud when you break on through
Part of the process is just being you
Bad habits will fall off like old leaves on a tree
It cannot go wrong when you truly believe

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Very good poem. It has an uplifting message after all ... many poets and writers suffer from the brooding and sullen personality that our experience dictates. I enjoyed the video performance as well.

Joshua Hennen
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Thanks very much for you kind words Joshua. As you probably know I have just joined the site. It looks very good indeed. Nice one. :-)

Billy Watson
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Thank you for the compliments. There are some great, talented poets and writers that regularly attend this site. I am very appreciative of everyone's creative contributions. We're doing our best to create new and innovative ways to promote them.

Joshua Hennen
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