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Musical revolution

   The notes falling upwards

Lyrical evolution

  Beyond moving forward

Creativity breaching

  Stretching the imagination

Indirectly teaching

  Through rythyms fascination

Wisdom and innocence

  Breathed out in sweet tones

Soulful variance

  Meant for me alone.

Plucking at my heart strings,

  Drumming out my soul,

Putting a voice to the everythings,

  That I have always known,

Spontaneous movement,

  My body beats a four-four,

Spiritual improvement,

  Dances me across the floor,

Stockpiling beats,

  To replay in my head,

Bass thumping heat,

  For warmth in my bed,

Instrumentally gratified,

  But up one more decibal,

Melodically satisfied,

  Belting out the notes for all,

Impressively versatile,

  You slow down my heart,

Reciting with style,

  The romance of art,

Wake me up in the morning,

  Lay me down to sleep,

Get me through the day,

  And say you're mine to keep.

Ok Go

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So this was my attempt at writing poetry inspired by the music thread...

wickedwahine_69
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and my new favorite band

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I was looking at your work since you started on Hennen's and it has improved quite a bit, I think. You're tackling varied subjects and in a mature way. A lot of people use the medium of poetry as a way to express heartache or joy only. But when a...

I was looking at your work since you started on Hennen's and it has improved quite a bit, I think. You're tackling varied subjects and in a mature way. A lot of people use the medium of poetry as a way to express heartache or joy only. But when a poet starts writing about everything with her medium, from the light whimsies to the weighty matters, she builds an impressive corpus of work that displays and at the same time develops her full range of abilities. True writers, like true artists, like true musicians, like true sculptors, etc ... create because they MUST. I especially liked this poem.

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Joshua Hennen
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I like Ok Go Too!!!!!

myownthoughts
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Thank you for your input... it's really the feedback that really keeps me growing! Hope you have a wonderful Holiday!

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