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I laugh

as I erase your joke from my life

with a click of some buttons.

You are now completely gone from me.

Stay blocked un-friended and away.

I banish you to the coldness

of the vast cyberspace.

Good luck with the hunt for new prey

as your ego is wounded

by my deletion of you.

Do you still feel like a somebody now?

Or are you realizing you are the same as before

Unknown and unloved.

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Danial Van Fleet I really loved the simplicity and depth of this poem. Thanks for taking us to this Cyber-Place in Space.

Vangoman
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Thank you. I wanted to show how simple we are making disconnection appear but how deeply it can still hurt. I originally had another line but don't know if I should add it back or not?

grunfruaorshell
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Danial Van Fleet
Why mess with perfection

Vangoman
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Perfection? I think you are right to leave it as is. Thank you again sir.

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