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Think.Want.Crave.Must Have Before Go Insane.

Fix. High....oh so high so sweet so high so sweet I can fly

Drips words of pseudo-romance and false sex to me

Oh my dirty love!

Let me drift into You..into You...into You melt and crash into you.

Why won't you take me away with you?

The morning is cold as you have left. Guilt. Anger. and so so so Sick.

Loneliness...so lonely

Think.Want.Crave.Must Have Before Go Insane.

Fix. High....oh so high so sweet so high so sweet I can fly

Drips words of pseudo-romance and false sex to me

Oh my dirty love!

Let me drift into You..into You...into You melt and crash into you.

Why won't you take me away with you?

The morning is cold as you have left. Guilt. Anger. and so so so Sick.

Loneliness...so lonely

Loneliness...so lonely

Think.Want.Crave.Must Have Before Go Insane.

Fix. High

Think.Want.Crave.Must Have Before Go Insane.

Fix. High

Think.Want.Crave.Must Have Before Go Insane.

Fix. High

oh so high so sad so high so sad I shall die

Think.Want.Crave.Must Have Before Go Insane.

Fix.Die

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Love. Love. Love.
What a "real" poem.

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Thank you.

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Wow! Now, while I am, by no means, a poet, this poem hit me hard. The addiction you speak of in the poem may not be the same addiction I think of, it still rings loud in my ears, my head, my heart.

I've been there, and I understand. If a...

Wow! Now, while I am, by no means, a poet, this poem hit me hard. The addiction you speak of in the poem may not be the same addiction I think of, it still rings loud in my ears, my head, my heart.

I've been there, and I understand. If a story or poem can evoke an emotional response, albeit good or bad, I deem it great. You've done that very thing with your poem.

Nice work!
~Rian~

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Thank you Rian. I am very touched by your response. Yes, I am glad that it evokes a sense of realistic emotinal turmoil. I was trying to express the inner workings of someone's heart/mind who is under the control of their addiciton. I hope that I...

Thank you Rian. I am very touched by your response. Yes, I am glad that it evokes a sense of realistic emotinal turmoil. I was trying to express the inner workings of someone's heart/mind who is under the control of their addiciton. I hope that I was able to achieve a small part of that...and am glad that you were able to make it safely to the other side of yours. -Shell

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