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The Club Scene

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Woman of passion

Scorching like a raging forest fire

With the smooth touch of silk sheets.

Kisses So tempting

Red lips like hard candy

Injected with sweet endorphins.

Black, that dress,

Entirely lace like every stitch was premeditated sin,

Evoking sweat from it’s friction

Eyes, almost emerald,

Gazing at me like a predator,

Well, Tigris of the dance floor, enjoy your feast.

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Great poem! Every metaphor and simile is original, which is very refreshing. You show real talent, Leslee. Stay with your poetry because its a serious business for the gifted.

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Well, thank you. That really means a lot.

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i like that phrase 'premeditated sin'. I like the poem too. Reminds me of the good old days

Soi-Disant, The Blue Roof

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You always seem to be way past your numerical year in this spraying of fresh springtime sensual words. Where did this exhalted experience find birth with you? And I want to say that I think we always enjoy these poems as it really is your forte.

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Well a mix between 4 years of creative writing in high school and a guy who had a way with words. Kind of caught on. I guess it was more or less the influence, and the outlet/escape. Yea I was gonna go with something else, but premeditated sin...

Well a mix between 4 years of creative writing in high school and a guy who had a way with words. Kind of caught on. I guess it was more or less the influence, and the outlet/escape. Yea I was gonna go with something else, but premeditated sin just stuck to me. Thank y'all for the comment.

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If I could throw in my own comment, the forest fire is that awesome red hair I can imagine twirling on the dance floor!! Never hurts to be talented and have nice hair. Keep up the good work!!

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You never commented about my hair, Alberto. What's wrong with my hair?

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your hair is nice too Joshua, just short of stunning.

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