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Negative Space

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Negative Space
As regards Art or if you like Life

thick silica liquid air
opaque sludge glittered
with pretty things

over whelm & over take:
creeping death.
i float to the surface

how can i stay
when i cant keep
my pretty things-

 

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It cuts deep within somewhere I have been, I must always put on my "pretty wings" and fly away from that space and time...

Well written.

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Minimal and rich at the same time, a very intriguing piece.

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Well, I dont believe my comment can compare to the previous, but I really like this poem. It touches me, evokes emotion, and is truly beautiful.

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