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Phantom Limbs

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I have no legs
They’ve been cut out from under me
Phantom limbs in their place
Walk me through my days
Pain where a strong sure strut once stood
In time new improved
Limbs will send signals
To my brain
How will I stand without the pain

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Very succinct and powerful piece.

Joshua Hennen
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Thank you Joshua. I am new to this and appreciate any constructive feedback.

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