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What Now?

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Crush it
like that butt.

Crush it out
smoked dirty black.

Residue unravels
above your head
still.

A fix that's been
had had had.

A whole pack:
   of wolves
   of lies
   of death.

1 2 --20

Come and get em all
I've got plenty.

Hi my name is Joshua.
Can I buy you a drink?

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Effective creation of atmosphere. Does the smoke linger in the air?

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This reads like a narration for a classic noir film. Superb.

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Makes me want to know..'what now'...and then after. Bravo!!

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Thank you for the compliments. This is more of a stream of consciousness, scribbled in about two minutes with minimal polishing afterwards. I was feeling pretty damned morose at the time. I think that Alberto's suggestion of smoke would add...

Thank you for the compliments. This is more of a stream of consciousness, scribbled in about two minutes with minimal polishing afterwards. I was feeling pretty damned morose at the time. I think that Alberto's suggestion of smoke would add another atmospheric that would finish it nicely.

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